Be carful with your words

It is by turns amusing and unsettling how much a small typo can alter the meaning of something.

For example, maybe you’ve seen someone list his title as “assistant manger,” which would make him a trough for horses and cattle to eat from.

A while back, I got an e-mail in which someone apologized for the “incontinence” instead of the “inconvenience.”

Hopefully, you’ve never accidentally left out the “l” in “Public” when writing the name of your school district.

Editors are trained to catch these types of gaffes, but we are human, after all, and are typically on tight deadlines. I subscribe to our esteemed local paper, the Los Angeles Times, and I often find an error or two without even going through the whole edition.

I’m just praying that this editorial ends up typo-free (except for the one you may have caught in the headline, which was intentional).

Of course, it’s not just spelling errors that can cause confusion. Accidentally leaving out what would seem to be an insignificant word can significantly change how a sentence comes across. I was reminded of that fact by an intriguing Washington Post article that I came across online recently.

Stopping a school bus?
A Virginia man who drove by a stopped school bus was let off the hook by a judge because of a missing word in the state’s school bus violations law. It reads:

“A person is guilty of reckless driving who fails to stop, when approaching from any direction, any school bus which is stopped on any highway, private road or school driveway for the purpose of taking on or discharging children.”

As the Post reported, an “at” was deleted when the law was amended in 1970. So, technically, it says that you have to stop a stopped school bus rather than stop at a stopped school bus.

“He can only be guilty if he failed to stop any school bus, and there’s no evidence he did,” Judge Marcus Williams said in the trial of 45-year-old John Mendez.

When informed of Mendez’s acquittal, Virginia legislator David Albo told the Post, “That’s not good. That’s a very serious charge. That needs to be fixed.”

On Dec. 7, another legislator, Scott Surovell, pre-filed a bill that aims to eliminate the loophole by plugging in the missing “at.”

Train your eyes
Even if you’re not drafting state legislation, writing correctly is essential in making sure that your message won’t be misunderstood. Here are some tips based on common errors that we SBF editors see:

• A driver doesn’t “loose” his license — he “loses” it.

• A school bus has “brakes,” not “breaks” (unless it’s falling apart, that is).

• If you say that a bus is “stationery,” that means it’s writing material. If you want to say that it’s not moving, “stationary” is the right word.

• “Quite” is often accidentally used in place of “quiet.”

• Even the word “misspelled” itself is sometimes misspelled as “mispelled.”

The spell check on computer programs is helpful, but it won’t catch a mistake like the use of the wrong “breaks.”

Before you send out an e-mail or distribute a document, be sure to take a careful look over it. And if it’s a high-profile matter, have someone else review it as well.

I know I’ll be proofreading this editorial about a hundred times.       

— Thomas McMahon, Executive Editor

 

Print | posted on Friday, January 07, 2011 11:27 AM

Comments

 re: Be carful with your words

left by Steve Barker at 1/10/2011 10:20 AM
What I always was curious about is, which is correct, busses or buses? If it is buses, then why do we see so many busses out there in printed journals?

 re: Be carful with your words

left by Brian Thelin at 1/10/2011 10:51 AM
I know what buses are. Busses I have no clue about.

# re: Communications Manager

left by Alan L. Heard at 1/10/2011 11:33 AM
Interesting subject. It is amazing how many small typos one can miss. I have proof read newsletters several times, only to read the final published version and find something I missed. Your mind must be trained to pay attention to detail. Otherwise, you will subconciously make corrections and never actually see some errors.

# re: Be carful with your words

left by Kari Kounkel at 1/10/2011 12:48 PM
Either "buses" or "busses" is correct. Our convention is to use "buses" when speaking of our fleet in the plural.

Considering either use is acceptable, the most important thing, I think, is choosing which to use. It would be poor form indeed to use both versions in a single document as some people do.

As something of a grammar snob - although one that makes frequent errors - I'm pleased to see the topic in an industry publication!

 re: Be carful with your words

left by John Horton at 1/10/2011 2:07 PM
Thomas, you are spot on; (and not: your spotton).
Same principles (not principals) apply to bus operators and dispatchers. Always speak clearly and succinctly.
One of our drivers called in an emergency, but cut off her last word. It was unclear if the driver said fire or fight. The dispatcher didn't think to reply: "...smoke and fire?" Instead she notified the Fire dept. They went several miles out into the country side, and discovered the emergency was two testosterone oozing young High school students finishing a fist fight.
Needless to say, the fire department was less than...well 'nuff siad.
Oh, let's do an article on communications sometime; verbal and written.

 re: Be carful with your words

left by Doug Geller at 1/10/2011 2:10 PM
Tom- If I go back over all editorials, I guarantee that I will find several typos. You did fine in this one so, kudos! Alan Heard's spelling of subconscious left out an 's'. As far as that Virginia court decision, the judge should have ruled properly by finding the driver in violation and recommending an immediate edit to the code. If you research the VA DMV website and pull up the driver manual, it clearly defines the requirements to stop for school buses, especially when loading or unloading passengers. It even has pictures. Also, the extended stop arms are octagonal shaped stop signs. I believe these are universally interpreted as a requirement to stop and not pass. Our buses have a statement printed on the back clearly stating: "Unlawful to Pass When Red Lights Flash". The flashing red lights come on automatically when the stop arms are activated. The judge could have advised the violator that children are killed or seriously injured routinely when drivers irresponsibly pass stopped school buses when discharging their students. The message he sent to legislators is valid but the methodology is totally flawed. Thanks for caring!

 re: Be carful with your words

left by George Horne at 1/10/2011 4:03 PM
Busses (like judgement) is an British version; buses (like judgment) is an American version. Preventative (instead of preventive) is another commonly misspelled (or misapplied) word.

# re: Be carful with your words

left by Thomas McMahon at 1/10/2011 5:17 PM
Thanks for the comments. It should also be noted (as one of our editors did in an article several years ago) that "buss" is a word meaning "to kiss." So if you write that your line of work is "bussing," that could lead to some confusion.

 re: Be carful with your words

left by Crispin Avon at 1/11/2011 7:00 AM
Buses is a British version.

 re: Be carful with your words

left by D.S.B.S.I. at 1/11/2011 10:34 AM
Buss is the commercial name of a type of fuse
Busses are more than one Buss
Buss bar is what holds the Busses
Busses are not used on Busses

 re: Be carful with your words

left by Michele Kuhne at 1/18/2011 3:31 PM
One of my pet peeves is people who use words incorrectly, spell them wrong or in any other way mangle the language.

I used to work for someone who always used "personal" instead of "personnel", usually when threatening someone with a disciplinary action, as in, "It is going in your personal file." Or so the memo was worded.

But then correcting memos and returning them for a rewrite doesn't make the people who wrote them happy!

Yesterday I passed a sign on the interstate advertising a "restuarant". Even at 55 miles an hour that error jumped out at me.

 re: Be carful with your words

left by Patti Johnson at 4/18/2011 8:50 AM
Re: buses or busses. The word "buss" means to kiss so I prefer to use buses just to make sure everybody knows what I am talking about!

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